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Re: Chapter Three : The Impossible Become Possible
OHMAIGAWD!!! I keep reading and reading and reading this piece over and over again and I just haven't reviewed it yet! Wow,I can't believe it's taken this long to review. ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: The Rape Tunnel (1)
Hello, Sureal. Is that supposed to be like "Surreal"? with two "R"s? Sorry, I get distracted easily. And you don't have to answer that if you don't want to, it's ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: Existentialism
Wow. I hadn’t read something that interesting in a while. Let me introduce myself, my name is Dianne! Pleasure to meet you Iroizen! Anyway, let me just say that this ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: The Blood, Book 1: Rubedo- Chapter 2
I’m in love with your writing. Yes, I know that sounds strangely creepy, but it’s true. You’re better than some of my favorite authors. First of all, the idea of ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Child
Hello, good sir. My name is Dianne! Let me start out by saying that this is the most beautiful piece of writing I have ever read! Yes, it amazed me ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Dear Juliet...
Hi! My name is Diane, but I prefer to spell it Dianne. Yeah, well, anyways, I cam to review your story! Which is, by the way, amazing! I’ve never read ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Rebirth Chapter 4
Amazing! Truly Amazing! :D My name's Diane, by the way! Your writing is a-ma-zing! I love it! I was completely distracted by the story line that I didn't really even ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Vampire Super Models
Hello Audrey! :D My name's Diane. Now that we've gotten over that, let's get started. I had just squished into one of the soft leather chairs at the front of ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: A Love Circle
Hi Ruby! :D This story is very nice. I was a little confused in the beginning. I didn't know if the character was a guy or a girl. After a ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Saved
Hi! My name is Diane, nice to meet you! :D Let's get started. You really shouldn't start a story with the word 'My'. My life's not perfect at all. You ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: How To Begin Your Summer
Oh my God, this story is amazing. It's not really my type of reading, but it's the best story I have ever read. Even if it is a short story. ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: These Stories With No End (Day 1)
Hi Morgan! :D My name is Diane! This piece is very mesmerizing. The similes and metaphors you used really captured my attention. There are a few things I noticed, though. ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: The Secret
Hi Corey!!! :D You really have potential. This piece is very good. I only found a couple of things. At the beginning of the passage, your writing is a bit ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
hi colleen :D nice to meet you! I really liked this story. :) It made me gooey eyed during the entire time I was reading it. There were only a ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Fading Rainbow (ch 1)
Hi :D I only wanted to say a few things about your story. It is really interesting, but there are a lot of errors. First, the spelling of some words ...
May 11, 2009
